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Edit of my rhyme scheme

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I wrote a little rhyme scheme today, and it’s a bit messy trying to find the flow, but one thing I learned is that you can really work with anything given to you.


I‘ve come up with this and I was wondering if what your processes would be in making it flow.




Ex.



How to write a rhyme scheme


Seems easy, see you take a sheet of paper


A pen then starts with what feeling.


Then you have find that balance between words that rhyme wait I already said rhyme


Damn again this happens all the time.


Well maybe it doesn’t matter as long as the flow’s fine.


“But isaiah wait how am I gonna make it sound nice when all I can talk about is nothing but what I ate today?”


I don’t care just make it rhyme anyway who says you can’t forge em till it works


Its your story, it’s your life and if they had a problem with it they can go try it for themselves


Hell, who care if its not perfect, take my advice, its better to have something then nothing it your head at all


Okay okay but enough of the intro


I know it was a bit of a mess to get


To get to this part so let’s talk


About the placement and the spaces it's like filling in the blanks and if you know just how to do it just think of what you can make so


1


2


3


4


Like a cross word take a word and go


5


6

7


8

Now let's try to play around and seee what we can make


1 time I tried 2 get up around 3 in hopes I can make it to school be4 the bell rings. 5 came around and everything feels fine until i’m looking out the door it’s 6 and i’m about to miss the bus fuck. Oh my bad, pardon my language. I'll censor that later, but it be hard out here when I can’t take the 7 minutes ride to school for only a dollar 60 cause man I'm easing down the road but it ain’t easy. I can’t stand how late be being

I feel dumber dumberer each day I gotta graduate


insane how much my additude has change and it keep changing and eventually i’ll make it to school before 8


Great, now we got something to work with, it’s a mess but that’s the thing.


it don’t take a genius to start it up but this is something i love to do so i guess it comes a bit easy but just take a little time and i bet that you’ll make a decent scheme of rhymes go on and give it a try i challenge you to write a line or two im sure i’d impressed so whatchu do you got it so why not give it a shot and make something that’s flowing and new



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